I like the rain drop animation you have done. Not sure how feel about rain drop that just continues to get larger and larger and larger..its just to much. I don't get a sense of a story line from what you have up but I am sure you will pull it together.
I really dig the fluid motion you've created for the water droplets. I can see you applying this effect to other graphics that relate to your concept. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
The first animation is really well done, I think if you are going to include the second half of the raindrop increasing in size I think that it doesn't need to go on for so long unless something else will be happening on screen like the appearance of information.
Nice start. I'm assuming that this is just the begining of the work, but your piece is going to incorporate more graphics throughout? Nice use of line color and vibration of the overlapping shapes.
We are missing the storyboard, no? Also missing the tutorial that goes with the psa--please read my previous email. I have no idea what this is about. On the logo, the mark is too small to see, maybe the image could be rippling like in water first before becoming focused? Although I guess it depends on what this is about. Did you create the logo yourself? This compounds the problem, being a 4 week exercise in itself. Have you tried any of Trapcode Particular's Rain Pre-sets?
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Interesting graphics, how can you use this to help reinforce the idea behind the PSA?
ReplyDeleteI like the rain drop animation you have done. Not sure how feel about rain drop that just continues to get larger and larger and larger..its just to much. I don't get a sense of a story line from what you have up but I am sure you will pull it together.
ReplyDeleteI really dig the fluid motion you've created for the water droplets. I can see you applying this effect to other graphics that relate to your concept. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
ReplyDeleteI like how the lines of the water drops start to flow at the end of the clip, curious to see how you incorporate it with your psa.
ReplyDeleteThe first animation is really well done, I think if you are going to include the second half of the raindrop increasing in size I think that it doesn't need to go on for so long unless something else will be happening on screen like the appearance of information.
ReplyDeleteNice start. I'm assuming that this is just the begining of the work, but your piece is going to incorporate more graphics throughout? Nice use of line color and vibration of the overlapping shapes.
ReplyDeletegreat start- excited to see where this is going.
ReplyDeleteReally clean. I love the kind of monochromatic look and I'm interested to see how this will fit in with your logo reveal.
ReplyDeleteHi Ben
ReplyDeleteWe are missing the storyboard, no? Also missing the tutorial that goes with the psa--please read my previous email. I have no idea what this is about. On the logo, the mark is too small to see, maybe the image could be rippling like in water first before becoming focused? Although I guess it depends on what this is about. Did you create the logo yourself? This compounds the problem, being a 4 week exercise in itself. Have you tried any of Trapcode Particular's Rain Pre-sets?
Check out http://forums.creativecow.net/thread/2/919110
Need storyboards asap please.